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Redundant?
by blackrox » Mon Feb 20, 2012 5:05 pm
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Re: Redundant?
by JR1 » Mon Feb 20, 2012 5:07 pm
Looks too cluttered to me, a sort of grabbed holiday snap, try concentrating on one boat or part of one.
Worst of all the sea is running downhill to the left, sloping horizons
Worst of all the sea is running downhill to the left, sloping horizons
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Re: Redundant?
by chris Hodgson » Mon Feb 20, 2012 6:02 pm
I quite like it as far as the shot goes. Yeah it could do with straightening a bit, and maybe toning the exposure down a little, but that's all I'd do. Sometimes photography isn't all about the "art" or perfectly composed shot. It's about capturing a moment in time, or a place you've been 
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Little edit below to show what I mean
.Little edit below to show what I mean
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Re: Redundant?
by Bob » Mon Feb 20, 2012 6:14 pm
I like it too; full of interest. A very nice record shot.
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Re: Redundant?
by Jayne-Yorks » Mon Feb 20, 2012 8:45 pm
Can't see the riginal but like the edit, also thinking a very contrasty mono would work well too
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Re: Redundant?
by JR1 » Mon Feb 20, 2012 8:58 pm
Don't delete originals it leaves a gap and nothing to compare
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Re: Redundant?
by ahab » Mon Feb 20, 2012 10:33 pm
I like the edit (not seen original) Agree with Jayne regarding mono.
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Re: Redundant?
by blackrox » Tue Feb 21, 2012 6:32 pm
The purpose of the shot was to show the clutter, Holy Island is an iconic place there is a working harbour but on my first visit I did not expect to see abandoned boats fish boxes and all manner if discarded items spread across the foreshore.
I took this the same day and tried to repeat it again on my last visit in October but more clutter seemed to have encroached
(my selective colour stage)
I took this the same day and tried to repeat it again on my last visit in October but more clutter seemed to have encroached
(my selective colour stage)
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